I politely asked Lydia, for a one to one, in order to expand slightly on my feedback and 100% uncovered exactly what each point they made meant.
The feedback I gained from my formative, is shown below;
While within my one to one, I managed to simultaneously note down a few points from spoken word. I have worked into them since scanning the page in - however the text is still clear.
My Notes Stating: -
Tutorial feedback explanation;
- Produce a positive design MANIFESTO
- make it Relevant
- Make it personal and helpful - even humerus
- This will help to pinpoint my reasoning.
- Produce a sheet of Consumer profile personas - make them relatable. Possibly x4.
For example a kinitter , a perfectionist. Make sure it's FUN, POSITIVE, and relatable HUMOUR.
- Make sure to break a template down. Into separate elements. What separate bits do i need in total to produce just 1 template. for example. an EXAMPLE SHEET - a great idea.
- Sense of humour - relates to my past project of puns.
- influencing my target audience and who im aiming my work towards.
- Relatability
All links my work and past projects together.
Fantatuc. This was SERIOUSLY helpful!! Now i fully understand - I am able to work into each of my points and improve my project thoroughly.
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